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Peer script analysis:

Peer Feedback from Joe Forsyth



Evaluation of Feedback:  I have read through the feedback and thought hard about what I have been given to do better. I agree with what Joe has said and have realised that I will give more description on the characters and maybe some on the background but with my story the background and setting is blurred because they are in a dream and image doesn't become clear till the end.








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